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January 15, 2007

Thoughts about you

Makes me feel lonely than truly I am
Smacks me in seconds
Haunts me for hours
Makes my heart heavy
Turns my world dark
Neither pleasant
Nor nervous do I feel
I lose my strength
I lose my senses
I forget my way
I forget my destiny
More I go further
More dizzier I feel
Gives a little hope
But a strange fear
Afterall who are you?
Making me think about more than I wish…..
Riding my senses more than I do…..

6 comments:

sunfivets said...
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Anonymous said...

Making me think about more than I wish..., Riding my senses more than I do...

These lines are wonderful Victor.

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

Victor,

It began with something else, but ended with something else...

Something which makes one so vulnerable can't be pleasant surely... or can it be?!

nice poetry but!

tc

RESTLESS

Purba said...

Sweet :)

Victor Guerra said...

Restless, Purba - Thanks.